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The Fight

The call rings in their heads, a call to cause pain
They try to block it out but fail
They have no chance to stay sane
Their minds are already condemned by what they ail

The brave ones fight, not caring the endangerment,
Though the fight is perilous and tough,
Some possess the strength to have reached achievement
Though those few are diamonds in the rough

The incurable rest, I fear, do not fair as well
They lie in wait, prowl, and torture their prey
The fighters strive to find where they dwell
They alone hold their own and these demons at bay

The fighters slay the diseased to save more
For the cause of saving the Earth from those weak at heart
The bloody sacrifices made in this horrible war
Every one brings us a step closer to the cure. Each doing their part

These soldiers are Earth’s only hope
The only way to make it whole once again
This way, with this infection, we can learn to cope
They stride headlong into those lost souls’ den

And so I give praise, as it is rightfully deserved,
To those who oppose, who battle and serve.
©2008-2010 ~Beeb-chan
:iconbeeb-chan:

Author's Comments

this particular poem, like many, can be seen in many different ways by different people. it is open to interpretation i personally look at it and see many things and possibilities. enjoy!

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:iconshinigami-mikon:
Wow!! <3
Its so good Reba!! FAVS~!!
:iconreluctant-uryu:
Major ditto.

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Be as ye as ye can be for me and He.
"I'd rather you eat it again than set our feet aflame!" ~Ritsu
I'll make leaps for my peeps cuz my peeps are for keeps!
Jesus loves you.
:iconbeeb-chan:
aw thanks ya'll

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~*Reza-chan*~~*Beeb-chan*~
the greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return
:iconbeeb-chan:
thats so good to hear!

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~*Reza-chan*~~*Beeb-chan*~
the greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return
:iconreluctant-uryu:
You've gotten so good over the summer! You're going to destroy C.W.C. this year! Just keeping trying new things, because you seem to be very good in many different settings/styles.

--
Be as ye as ye can be for me and He.
"I'd rather you eat it again than set our feet aflame!" ~Ritsu
I'll make leaps for my peeps cuz my peeps are for keeps!
Jesus loves you.
:iconbeeb-chan:
lol derek this is from last year in school lol i read it at CWC

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~*Reza-chan*~~*Beeb-chan*~
the greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return
:iconreluctant-uryu:
*fathers an illegitimate leprechaun son(a.k.a. fails)*

--
Be as ye as ye can be for me and He.
"I'd rather you eat it again than set our feet aflame!" ~Ritsu
I'll make leaps for my peeps cuz my peeps are for keeps!
Jesus loves you.
:iconbeeb-chan:
lol yes you do fail

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~*Reza-chan*~~*Beeb-chan*~
the greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return
:iconreluctant-uryu:
Indeed. I'm gonna be gatherin mah leprechaun horde one of these days, and ya'll are gonna have one heck of an epic fight on your hands.

--
Be as ye as ye can be for me and He.
"I'd rather you eat it again than set our feet aflame!" ~Ritsu
I'll make leaps for my peeps cuz my peeps are for keeps!
Jesus loves you.

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